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Hey there and welcome! This is a wonderful poem. I enjoyed reading it with its refreshing rhymes and concise language. A good poem is one that keeps the reader engaged ...

This is a good poem, but considering how you posted that it’s something you feel strongly about, I guess that you would want some constructive critiquing. If you don't, then ...

Hi :) While this is a long poem, it's hardly long enough to put an avid reader off especially as this poem is both brilliant and intriguing. The concise descriptions ...

Great poem. Very chilling indeed and enjoyable! The rhythm is a bit fragmented and irregular at times but it works along with the irregular rhyme...I quite like that because it ...

Hallo Hmm...inspired by the Romantic poets methinks ;) I've read it through a few times and each time, the second line jars. I don't think that the enjambement works there, ...

Trudi Canavan is definately one of those authors that can get away with creating a completely new world without being too cliche *cough* unlike Paulini *cough* The Black Magician trilogy ...

Tonight the lights are dimmed; The halls fall on deaf ears. Each doorway an entrance To the unknown—to the human. Somewhere a mothers tears Fall for her child. Someplace a ...

I thought the ending was too abrupt! It should never end XD I cried at the part when (someone) is sobbing over (someone else)'s body and he can't do anything ...

I definately find Mister Monday the best one, even though it's the first of the series. I have to admit that i had to read them again because of the ...

I'm count myself as a Garth nix fan. Sabriel - really good, a very good beginning to a series. Lirael - not bad, though I was impatient for Sam and ...

Let’s see what I can find in here then *rummages*… Lights shone and the room reverberated with noise. A man then walked into ring and everyone stopped speaking as he ...

It's a good start to a novel, a nice insight into the character. I think you should space the paragraphs...makes it easy to read. Medea stood staring fixedly ahead, the ...

Silbury Street was quiet and respectable, if slightly poor. It was a street of old inns and shops, run by people in threadbare but tidy clothing. Between the bakery and ...

This reminds me of one of those homeworks where you're asked to describe the setting for something. If that was the case, this would be an excellent piece, however, it ...

**shrugs** Well I guess that one went whooshing straight over my head, LOL, since I have no idea who Prince is. Sorry! I think Prince is that artist who changed ...